However, before I go, here's an editing update:
Part I (chapters 1-8)
- Revision "1" (as in first pass for this draft on the word doc in comments (which actually involved about three passes over everything)) is done. I've accepted all changes in the word doc.
- Printed the pages and got through around chapter five making revision 2 on paper.
- Put in the changes for chapter 1 (and made a few more changes) and half of chapter 2.
I could pick at this forever. I would say this is about the 12th draft of this chapter (at least)? Some were drafts minor edits, other drafts were cutting sections of text and/or rewriting passages. But I feel like this is it - for chapter 1.
Small victories. They're important. :)
Chapter 2, watch out!